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The Best Dream And The Best Friends EveR by Lunatic-Hao-ChaN The Best Dream And The Best Friends EveR by Lunatic-Hao-ChaN
This picture is a little thank you for over 60 Watcher. :iconplzhug:
I am very happy and I hope that I to get further a lot of feedback in the future.
:iconthankyouscript1::iconthankyouscript2::iconthankyouscript3: to all who like my art.
I worked 15 hours at the picture and I am very proud.
My pixel art is getting better I think. :sun:
At the picture you can see my OC Luna and my guinea pigs.
Hope you like it and I'm happy about any comments and :+fav:
Edit: redesigned version 3.1.2013
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No theft, no making it into bases etc.
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Art © *Lunatic-Hao-ChaN :iconlunatic-hao-chan:
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:iconalaingalvan:
There's definitely a clean anime feel to this, it looks really cool. A nice soft use of colors. Looks pretty cute. :3

The first thing I noticed is how the stars don't look perfectly proportioned. Instead of pasting them around, give some little alterations, like some spark effects, or having some rotated a bit like they were made of paper.

The shading appears to want to come from the right-hand side, but the hair needs to have some variations in its shading to denote this, at the moment it looks like there's no light source. I'd recommend highlighting each strand, and using adaptive dithering that shows a texture of hair.

The outlines also need some smoothing. Try using selective outlining and anti-aliasing. Also, sometimes it's not always a good idea to have the outlines be only one pixel. Try having them be 2 pixels thick, or even thickening the outlines on angles so they look to be 1.5 pixels in your eye.

Avoid using outlines where they're not needed too, like with the candy juice and the pillow cloth alterations. Hope this helps. :D
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ScarabsCorner Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very cute
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:iconlunatic-hao-chan:
Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :huggle::heart:
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ScarabsCorner Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your welcome
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stardust3105 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Student General Artist
this looks reaaaalllyyy good :iconflailingplz:
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Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thank you very much :iconhyperplz:
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desu-cookies Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
Love it! So cute!
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Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thank you ^.^ :love:
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desu-cookies Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013
No problem!:)
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Chu-Chu-Panda Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
cuuuute!
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:iconlunatic-hao-chan:
Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank u :iconrubcheeksplz:
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gnarsly Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
All those fluffy guinea pigs...
x3
You did a great jb with the shading, especially for those sweets
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:iconlunatic-hao-chan:
Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much :iconllama3-plz:
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gnarsly Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem 83
You really did make the candy look delicious ovo
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RocioZero Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is too cute :iconloveloveplz: So sweet and lovely ~♥ An excellent job!
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:iconlunatic-hao-chan:
Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG Thank you very much. :meow:
I'm happy that you like my work :huggle:
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MellowMagoo Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Did you reference something for this?
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Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The pose I have received from my friend and the poses of my guinea pigs are from my guinea pigs. XD if you mean that ^.^
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Wolfypoof Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so cute!
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:iconlunatic-hao-chan:
Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much :cuddle:
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Himeko-Chan3 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012
I love the colors and the pose! The way the animals are holding on to her is very lovely! Good job!
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Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I am glad that you like it ^_^
(I'll rework it again when I have more time so it look even better.)
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Himeko-Chan3 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012
I'm glad that you're glad too!
( I think it's fine but if you want to redo it then i's you choice =) )
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Metaknightgirl42 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
AWWWW so cute x3!
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:iconlunatic-hao-chan:
Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^__^ Thank you very much :heart:
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Metaknightgirl42 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012
You're welcome :3
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:iconallieantic:
allieantic Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing, Luna-chan ^^
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Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :meow:
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allieantic Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome ;)
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SplitNinja Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The cuteness!!!:heart:
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Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :iconfoxawwplz:
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SplitNinja Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Welcome.:icononionloveplz:
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CelesteStone Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's adorable! And so well done. *noddles*
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:iconlunatic-hao-chan:
Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is the first large pixel image that I have created and I am glad that you like it ^_^
Thank you very much :iconhappysunplz:
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Jowesline Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Student General Artist
So cute, I love it. ♥
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:iconlunatic-hao-chan:
Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I am very pleased :cuddle:
Thank you so much ^_^
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Jowesline Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Student General Artist
:hug: You're welcome. ^^ :hug:
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Shinzo89 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very very very sweet O.o
:iconplzhug:good work darling :heart: ^^
am proud of you :fish:
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Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you *kiss* :iconsweethugplz:
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coloradium Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
love at first sight ♥
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:iconlunatic-hao-chan:
Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconhyperplz: I am glad :sun:
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oONorchenOo Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so süß! freue mich, dass.du schon eine gute Anzahl von watchern hast :3
wünsche dir noch viel Erfolg! <3
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Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Uii vielen lieben Dank ^__^
Das freut mich sehr :hug:
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Angie-Crystal-Star Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow amazing:wow:! The design is really cute:aww:!
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Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I am glad that you like it :iconchuu-kun:
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LarissaLombax Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
really cute
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Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much :iconhyperplz:
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LarissaLombax Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
NP ^^
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