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The Best Dream And The Best Friends EveR by Lunatic-Hao-ChaN The Best Dream And The Best Friends EveR by Lunatic-Hao-ChaN
This picture is a little thank you for over 60 Watcher. :iconplzhug:
I am very happy and I hope that I to get further a lot of feedback in the future.
:iconthankyouscript1::iconthankyouscript2::iconthankyouscript3: to all who like my art.
I worked 15 hours at the picture and I am very proud.
My pixel art is getting better I think. :sun:
At the picture you can see my OC Luna and my guinea pigs.
Hope you like it and I'm happy about any comments and :+fav:
Edit: redesigned version 3.1.2013
No theft, no making it into bases etc.
Art *Lunatic-Hao-ChaN :iconlunatic-hao-chan:
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There's definitely a clean anime feel to this, it looks really cool. A nice soft use of colors. Looks pretty cute. :3

The first thing I noticed is how the stars don't look perfectly proportioned. Instead of pasting them around, give some little alterations, like some spark effects, or having some rotated a bit like they were made of paper.

The shading appears to want to come from the right-hand side, but the hair needs to have some variations in its shading to denote this, at the moment it looks like there's no light source. I'd recommend highlighting each strand, and using adaptive dithering that shows a texture of hair.

The outlines also need some smoothing. Try using selective outlining and anti-aliasing. Also, sometimes it's not always a good idea to have the outlines be only one pixel. Try having them be 2 pixels thick, or even thickening the outlines on angles so they look to be 1.5 pixels in your eye.

Avoid using outlines where they're not needed too, like with the candy juice and the pillow cloth alterations. Hope this helps. :D
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ScarabsCorner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very cute
Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :huggle::heart:
ScarabsCorner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your welcome
stardust3105 Dec 3, 2013  Student General Artist
this looks reaaaalllyyy good :iconflailingplz:
Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thank you very much :iconhyperplz:
Love it! So cute!
Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thank you ^.^ :love:
Chu-Chu-Panda May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Lunatic-Hao-ChaN Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank u :iconrubcheeksplz:
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